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Chicago Loop. May 19, 2010
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UPDATE: edited version. (8/3/10)
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UPDATE: edited version. (8/3/10)
Image size
1576x2643px 2.56 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-W150
Shutter Speed
10/1250 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
May 19, 2010, 2:16:35 PM
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I like the idea you have here. The angle of the shot is interesting and with a bit of work would be pretty cool!
My eyes immediately go to the blown out building on the right and then slide down to the underexposed train. You have a very challenging lighting condition here. It would probably help to expose the building properly and dodge out the train in Photoshop. There seems to be plenty of detail in the train to be able to do that. However once you overexpose the building you loose detail. I think this could be a really cool shot with a bit of work.
Michelle---=Masterwks--- Member of #thephotographyunion critique team.